2022_심화영어독해와작문

REVISE AND EDIT Discuss these questions with a partner or group. What is something new you learned in this writing section? 1. What did you learn from sharing your writing, and how can you utilize it to improve your writing skills? 2. REFLECT A Revise 1. Carefully review your draft based on the following points and revise your essay. 2. Exchange papers with your partner. Getting your partner’s opinion is a good way to know if your writing is clear and effective. (1) Structural Consistency : Use the same structure for each subject to improve clarity. Ex. Chinese teenagers often study hard, and they have strong family ties. Canadian teens like to hang out with friends and have more freedom. → Chinese teenagers often focus on studying hard and maintaining strong family ties, while Canadian teens prefer socializing with friends and enjoy more freedom.( revised ) (2) Specific and Credible Evidence : Back up your claims with reliable evidence. Ex. Chinese teenagers have a lot of homework, and Canadian teens also have homework. They both try to balance school and friends. → Research shows that Chinese teens often face an average of 14 hours of homework per week, while Canadian teens report around 10 hours; despite these differences, both groups try to balance academic demands with social activities. ( revised ) (3) Clear Transition Sentences : Use transition words or phrases to connect ideas smoothly. Ex. Chinese teens have strict rules at home. Now, let’s look at Canadian teenagers, who generally have more freedom. → Chinese teens typically follow strict household rules, whereas Canadian teenagers experience more freedom, showing a clear cultural difference. ( revised ) Complete the checklist below as you prepare to write your final draft. My essay is logically structured and flows well. My language and grammar are correct and appropriate. I’ve correctly used the learned strategies and expressions. B Edit 56 I Unit 2