2022_심화영어독해와작문

Discuss these questions with a partner or group. What is something new you learned in this writing section? 1. What did you learn from sharing your writing, and how can you utilize it to improve your writing skills? 2. REVISE AND EDIT REFLECT Complete the checklist below as you prepare to write your final draft. My essay is logically structured and flows well. My language and grammar are correct and appropriate. I’ve correctly used the learned strategies and expressions. B Edit 1. Carefully review your draft based on the following points and revise your essay. A Revise (1) Clear Thesis and Argument : Ensure that the essay’s topic is clear and the main argument is well-defined. Ex. Modern technology affects both the good and the bad aspects of our lives. → Modern technology has transformed our lives in both positive and negative ways, impacting how we communicate, work, and live. ( revised ) (2) Logical Structure : Clearly distinguish between the introduction, body, and conclusion, ensuring each section is logically connected. Ex. In conclusion, technology is good, and it helps us a lot. We have phones, and we use them for everything. Finally, tech is here to stay. → In conclusion, technology is essential to everything from smartphones to global communication, and it’s here to stay. ( revised ) (3) Supporting Evidence : Provide evidence and examples to support your claims. Ex. Many people think technology is great, and it can do everything you need, but it can also cause problems sometimes. → Technology offers many benefits but also has drawbacks, such as privacy concerns. ( revised ) 2. Exchange papers with your partner. Getting your partner’s opinion is a good way to know if your writing is clear and effective. 134 I Unit 5