2022_심화영어독해와작문

131 C. Expressions & Sentence Patterns Persuading To write an effective persuasive essay, it is important to use convincing language and to provide strong evidence and examples. • It’s undeniable [clear, obvious] that rapid advancements in science and technology have transformed our daily lives. • It’s imperative [crucial] that we continue to invest in research to ensure sustainable progress. • Studies indicate [have shown] that technology can enhance education, in particular through online learning platforms. • The advancement of science and technology has brought about innovations in various fields, in particular in the medical sector. • There have been dramatic advancements in communication technologies, such as the rise of video conferencing tools that facilitate remote work and virtual meetings. Transitioning Use transition words and phrases to properly connect and organize your arguments. • Secondly [Moreover, In addition] , advancements in genetic engineering are paving the way for breakthroughs in agriculture, leading to more sustainable food production. • Furthermore , smart technologies, from smart homes to wearable health devices, are enhancing our daily lives. • In conclusion [In summary] , the evolution of science and technology is essential for a better future. • Overall [Therefore, To conclude] , embracing these advancements will lead to a more innovative and resilient society. •For further studies, see pp. 158–159. Technology has revolutionized the way we live, work, and communicate. It has made our lives easier and more convenient. , technology has been instrumental in various fields, such as medicine and education, leading to significant breakthroughs. , we must also consider the potential risks of technology, such as online crime and the loss of privacy. , it is essential to strike a balance between the benefits and the risks of technology. , we must use technology responsibly and actively mitigate any potential negative impact. Fill in the underlined blanks below with the appropriate transition words. Exercise However Therefore Moreover In conclusion